Tuesday 23 September 2014

Chapter 13


Rudra saw their faces for the first time. Rajeev Mehra and Poonam Mehra.


It looked as if being part of America has not touched them in anyway.  They looked quite Indian. Doting parents of Myrah. There was a warmth in their eyes when they were talking to Myrah. Rudra was still standing away from the laptop. He heard Rajeev Mehra asking,” Where is your boy ?” Rudra was surprised that the Mehras wanted to see Dhruv first. Dhruv must be fast asleep by now. The children were so exhausted after all the drama earlier in the day. Maybe Rajeev Mehra did not remember the time difference between USA and India. Hence his interest to see Dhruv at this point of time. He was about to voice his hesitation to wake Dhruv up in the middle of the night when Myrah came near him and pulled his hand and took him near the laptop.

“Here Dad, this is Rudra.” It took Rudra a couple of minutes to register that Myrah’s father had addressed Rudra himself as the “boy”. And he was caught unawares and could only mumble a feeble “Namaste” to the Mehras. Then Rudra saw the change in expression. In Rajeev’s face. There was clear unhappiness in his face. A subtle change for any normal person to observe. But for the ex-Major who was taught to read face expressions – it was enough. Clearly Mr Mehra was not happy with what he saw on his monitor. “Hello” – Rajeev responded rather curtly.

“Hello Beta” came the joyous reply from Myrah’s mom. No dislike, no disapproval. Only acceptance. Half the battle is won, thought Rudra.

“Rudra, these are my parents. The dashing Rajeev Mehra and the beautiful Poonam Mehra. The beeeeeeessssssssssst parents in this whole world.“ said Myrah happily stretching her hands to indicate the world. Her world.
 
Rudra could see a little bit of apprehension on Myrah’s face. About how this first meeting will go. And that made Rudra a little nervous too. Rudra of the past was never bothered about creating a good impression on anybody. But now he is a changed man. And his Paro and their love are at stake. He did not want to start on a wrong foot with Myrah’s parents.

“Hello Sir. Hello Madam” Rudra mumbled again. His BSD circle always made him address strangers as Sir and Madam. “ What rubbish. Beta, call us Mom and Dad. We are not your clients.” pat came Poonam Mehra’s reply. “ Haan Rudra. They are going to be your parents too.”

“Haan. Par.......” Rudra was not sure what to say. Mom and Dad ? Kaise ? Pehle Kisiko bhi Aise Angrezi Mein..

Myrah could sense his hesitation. Maybe he is not happy with the English words. “ What do you call parents ? Haan Baapusa and Maasa. You can call them that.” Myrah suggested

“OK” Rudra agreed. He just wanted to get over this addressing procedures. If the starting itself is so lengthy how is he going to survive the knowing them and mingling with them part ?

Rudra could not help remembering the way he first met Paro’s only relative. Her Mamisa. In the middle of a big crowd in the village while he dragged Paro and taunted and goaded Mamisa to identify Paro. So that he could find Paro guilty by association !!

 

54 comments:

  1. Bechara rudra :(
    Not able to adjust in their family talks

    So myrah died and paro got switched?
    Exactly what I thought but I still want myrah to be alive so that she can go back to US with her family.

    Awesome chapter!
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    Preggy

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    1. Hi Preggy, Myrah died ? Kab ? Noooo. Paro also did not die. This is a happy FF. Nobody dies. Have you read from the prologue ? If no please please read it. And nobody is going anywhere. Remember the haveli attracts people :-)

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  2. Bechara Rudra. Meeting the "NRI" parents.....whew....at least this will be out of the way soon. LOL

    Kerrie

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    1. Not so soon Kerrie, Iss Baar time Lagega ..........Remember 2 states ?

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    2. 2 States???

      Hope "Myrah" remains sensitive to who Rudra is. If nothing else I am hoping "Myrah" and Rudra talk to each other openly.
      Kerrie

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  3. hi jj..beautifully written....hmmm why our cv's could not think this way to take story further ...anyway everything is done.
    u guys keeping parud and thier story alive...
    its nice ff...keep going! (jally)

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    1. Thanks jally. How can we let our Parud go ? Through FF we have no budget issues. No date issues of stars. We can bring in anyone in any role. Did you see the Khers are also in our FF now :-)

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    2. Ya i saw the khers Its just wow.
      And agree wit u we cant let go our parud.
      Parud hamesh :-):-)
      Jally

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  4. Let me tell u this, I adore Kiron Kher!! if ever she comes on telly, would love her to play Sanaya's mom!! Can u imagine the amount of madness we will get :D :D !!! And u made a wish I did not know lurked in my mind until I saw the pic come to life!! Thank you and muaah (Blushing)
    Ok coming to the update, one complain.. bahut short hai :P... Yea yea.. dil kya kare..yeh dil maange more ;)

    more than an update, I felt this is just a minute of the story line... Very screenplay like.. Rudra never had to undergo the pain of getting accepted by Paro's family na??? It was only she who had to blend in to the fabric of the family. Looks like its Rudra's turn now!!
    So why is the dad unhappy ??? hmm.. just a protective dad or daal mein kuch kala hai ???
    eagerly waiting for the next update!! U have got me rubbing my hands in glee and waiting to see what other tortures.. eeks.. i mean tests Rudra has to pass through this time!!
    man had it too easy last time around (Evil eyes :P)

    POV

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    1. POV, me too. me too. I love Kiron Kher. And also Anupam Kher when he is like DDLJ kind of role. These two with Sanaya would have been a laughing riot. At least in SBB and SBS segments.

      Update short hai. pata hai. But hold on. Very soon two new writers (very well known) are going to join us. Am not letting out the dates or the names as of now. As there are some (like aaliah) who are trying to point out who wrote what. Very difficult for me (considering I am the worst one of the lot) !!

      Yes Rudra has to struggle this time. Can you imagine Rudra reacting to "My boy" from Mr Mehra ?

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    2. Me too ... I let out a whoop when I saw the pics JJ had posted! It's so much easier to write characters when you can put a face to them :)

      JJ, Rudra reacting to 'My boy' cracks me up ... first of all, Rudra being called 'boy' was hilarious! Was trying to imagine his reaction to that.

      Paro was alone and defenceless, with no one to fight her battles for her. Myrah has loving parents, who are rich and powerful Rudra was in a position of complete power over Paro, not only as a man, but also as her captor and a Major of the BSD. Now he is just a man, a widower with a child, and a small businessman ... small in comparison to Myrah's parents.
      It will be interesting to see how the equations change.

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    3. JJ, I love ur sarcastic wit.. Yup.. I do have a weird sense of humor :D :D.
      Like Aaliah, I too cant figure out who wrote what... I will bite the bullet and say Diya... purely because u write lengthier updates??? (from what I have seen) and Diya is traveling, hence less time for the updates :D :D.
      let me know if my detectivegiri is bang on :P
      OOO, I love this medley of minds meeting up to concoct a sumptuous dessert for us!!
      Yea... salviating thinking about the offscreen segments.. Anupam Kher is a riot, did u see him on Comedy nights with Kapil.. watch that one.. he had made a song for the vanishing hair.. for the ganjas.. too freaking hilarious :D :D. I just watched his show cos the promos with anupam kher looked interesting..
      I can so imagine... remember - he called Paro bachchi.. bachchi abhi badi ho gayi hai (The suhag raat.. when he forces her to have milk)...
      Mr.Mehra Rudra conversations are going to remind me of Singh saab... How Rudra wanted to say things but was shut down cos he is senior.. same gonna happen with papa Mehra too ...
      OOOOOOO.... kickback time eh ;)
      P.S: Am I the only one gloating seeing Rudra in this kashmakash ;)

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    4. No I have not seen the Anupam Kher with Kapil combo. Will watch it. Both the Khers are wonderful actors. Detectivegiri ki results will be announced after aaliah also responds. She has promised to do so today.

      Yes I remember the bacchi badi ho gayi scene. However good the writers are I doubt whether anybody can bring the emotions and expressions as well as Sanish.. SOB..SOB..

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    5. Ok I had replied , but no idea where the damn reply went!! Anyway.. u guys not updating ?? SOB SOB :P

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    6. Oh we will. All of us are caught up with vacation and festival. From mid next week plan to be on time. Sorry about that.

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  5. NIce update. Myrah's father surely look formidable. For an introvert man like Rudra, it is surely an uphill task. Last time Rudra got everything very easy. Good to see this time him taking efforts and that too a lot of it will require. A man pursuing his woman is what I enjoy the most.
    A justification of Myrah's love for Rudra is needed. Agree that she is Paro and theirs is a soulmate connection. But it is we viewers that can see it. Doesn't Rohit and Myrah's father and even Myrah herself needs to know why exactly she loves Rudra.

    Loving this story very much.

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    1. Thanks psagars. Yes I agree with you. It is a big task for Rudra to adjust. I know Myrah's POV is still pending. I am waiting for one of the more compelling authors to make their presence to do the honors. But I assure you - you will get it

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  6. Oh wow Anupam & Kiran kher.... good one, as always JJKKL ...... I like to see Rudra in command always .... him fumbling & getting nervous isn't appealing but I like your justification that he is doing it coz he is very careful this time , it's question of his Paro & he has to tread very carefully so it's ok

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    1. Yes we do want Rudra always to be in command - right ? But he has to be careful with Myrah. So let him fight for his love this time. Gad you like Myrah's parents :-)

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  7. Superb! Thank you. Wow for Anupam & Kiran

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    1. Thanks. Who is this BTW ? Anupam and Kiron are the best :-)

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  8. Thank you my dear friend. Just don't make Rudra too sissy, my request . Till now it's great.

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    1. Thanks. Can you please also add your name in the comment ? Rudra is not being sissy. This is foreign territory for him. So he has to be cautious - right ?

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    2. You are right. I am Harshuu.

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  9. Short and sweet Chapter.
    Testing time for Rudra.

    "Where is your boy?" - Here is the States, this statement is considered very condescending and arrogant. Not a very appropriate thing to say about a grown man who is going to marry one's daughter. Father of the bride - not very classy. Mother of the bride is sweet and showed respect. My POV.

    Hoping Myrah/Paro doesn't expect Rudra to "change" and is supportive of him. Rudra in the past didn't have to explain himself to anyone but he was always supportive of Paro. Myrah is a sensitive woman and she feels a "connection" with the Ranawat family so I expect her to be sensitive to who Rudra is.

    Take care.
    Madhu

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    1. Thanks Madhu for the comments. Yes I understand - it is condescending. Arrogant ? Maybe. But we need to look at it from the Mehra's perspective too. Poor guy must want to kill this person who has made her daughter change her mind at the last minute...

      Mothers are always nice - except Mala and Mohini I guess :-) Oh no... if there are any Mala supporters please do not bash me

      Rudra does not want Myrah to change - he told her so. But Myrah ? We do not know yet.

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  10. Sorry JJ,

    I tried posting in your blog but not happening..Will leave comments till I find the solution for the same..

    LOL..Anupam and Kiran as Myra's parents...Glad u continued the story... My heart still not accepting the sudden death of RR..Nice going

    Just hope the new relationships doesn't put a stop sign for Rudra and Paro/Myra...after all they have been united after 7 long years.Wink.

    Cheers
    Deepa

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    1. I am also in denial phase Deepa. Just damn bugged. About the last few weeks of the serial and the ending. I think I needed closure more than anything else :-(

      Yeah good days are ahead. We need to wait. Right now NRI time ..............

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  11. Boy Oh Buoy! Nice one...Rudra trying to do his best to creat an impressions.If he wants his girl back, he gotta go aallll the way!

    Not related to RR - I had chosen Anupam as Sanz's FIL in another SS of mine (but as a funny kind of guy- Diya had read it on another forum a long time ago) he was the hero's father. So its just not jsut me, but you as well who visualize AK playing Sanz Father or FIL! (laughs) I like giving face to the characters as well..And love this duo. They are simply awesome as Mr & Mrs Mehra! - DD

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    1. Boy oh Buoy ? Nice one DD. There is always the first time. For Rudra I mean. For everything. LOL

      Since we did not see these new characters - we thought of attaching some faces. Nothing like visuals - right ?

      No poem for Rudra's plight ?

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  12. this was so nice jj...tried to.comment in blog...but not happening...so did here...
    u r excellent - HemaG (IF)

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    1. Thanks HemaG. Please select one option out of Reply as. Else I understand you lose the comments. Can you try again and let me know ?

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  13. Hi I commented on the blog but it did not go through either - maybe the comments have to be approved? Sometimes blogs do that - anyway just wanted to say great chapter - maybe Mr Mehra knows something , mrs Mehra seems like a riot as much as Myra, glad you are taking time with the wedding and I hope Myra remembers soon - but am happy to wait for it to happen!

    I love this story

    neet2407

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    1. Thanks Neet for commenting. And being ready to wait. Yes Mrs Mehra is a riot :-)

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  14. Beautiful updates JJ. I tried to comment before for the other chapter 11 & 12 but could not get thru. Super updates and wow I love Myrahs mom and dad. Hope they are not a bottle neck for Myrah and Rudra's relationship. But I love Anupan kher and Kirron. I have nothing else to add or say. This is what I wanted to see in RR and glad u are still writing this and hoping to read the next chapters soon. God bless JJ for the efforts. Sorry for the delay in responding
    Love
    Praba

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    1. Thanks Praba. We plan to continue writing this. Due to holidays all of us are tied up. Plan to start with full force from next week

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  15. Awesome update JJ. Loved it. So love the new couple on the block Mr & Mrs Mehra. But hope they are not a hurdle for Myrah and Rudra. Cant wait to read the next updates and thanks for continuing the story. Such a relief
    God bless JJ
    Love
    Praba

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    1. Thanks Praba. I guess this is a duplicate post. Thanks for trying to put in comments in spite of the issues you faced

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  16. Good update. Love your choice of actors for Myrah's parents though I like Anupam as the fun dad than the tough dad. Maybe its because he loves Myrah and is being cautious, he seems that way.

    Coming to Rudra, he is feeling very awkward and that is expected. And it looks like he has to work hard this time for his marriage. Looking forward to see him win over her dad.

    - Rithu from IF

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    1. Anupam Kher as fun Dad is much better I agree. But we still do not know how he will turn out to be :-) Thanks for commenting Rithu

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  17. Okay so I typed my comment, but since I didn't select how I want it to be posted, it got delete! So I will just summarize what I had said earlier.

    Rudra is definately in for a tough ride! Papaji won't accept him that easily. But I am glad that unlike many indian tv shows, it's not woman who has to prove herself. This time it's going to be Rudra. The son in law. And I love the fact that the parents don't treat him as a demi god, just because he is a son in law. Oh and lol, when Daddy dear calls Rudra a "Boy." Honestly, I would be offended if my would be was called a boy when he is a full grown man that too with a kid. Great job, please update soon. nine2 aka H

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    1. Nine2, I can understand your feeling offended at Mehra calling Rudra "boy" But please remember they do not know that Rudra has a kid and is married. Also in the eyes of parents children are always children. Maybe Mehra is used to calling Rohit also "Boy" :-)

      Thanks nine2 for commenting. We will update regularly from next week. At least we want to !!

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  18. hi there JJ dear ....
    I am typing with the hope that it will allow me to post my comment. I have not been able to since a long time.... well! the update is really good.... gives a bit satisfaction to the mind that it is Rudra now ho has to do a lot of work to get his Paro back.... he got her too easliy in the RR I had always thought.
    He already knows the value of Paro and he will have to earn it from Mr and Mrs. Mehra .... good prgression!!! Loved it.

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    1. Yes google did not let you down this time. I can see your comment. Am glad you liked the update. Yes, this time around Rudra has to put in some effort.

      Yes I too agree that he got Paro so fast and with no effort from his side.

      Running to the next comment of yours ............

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  19. Wonderful progression on the story. I know that Rudra got Paro without any conflict. This time he has to deal with parents, wonderful choice: The Khers. Thank you for the pm, will await more.... Lovely edits by Mano. Take Care. Mukti

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    1. Thanks Mukti. The Khers are always a treat to watch. And it is easier for us if we have a face to attach to the name - right ?

      Glad you liked it

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  20. so finally rudra sees myrah's parents.. poonam has already accepted him.. hope rajeev is not too tough on poor rudra.. nice update..
    -Directional.

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    1. THanks Directional. Glad you liked it. Thanks for dropping by

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  21. Nice update n enjoyed the comments too..n love the choice of onscreen parents too..so easy to imagine Ashish feeling weird in front of the laptop while a stern looking Anupam n softy kiron look on...like someone pointed out..its so nice to see that u r opening up a whole new door for developing the story, now Rudra has to make a place in myrah's parents hearts, only paro ka angle was shown..should be fun to read banna ka angle now ;-) this is how soaps need to be written..where there is quality n quantity in the story to go on n on...every character ke liye something..more so for the leads..i m really enjoying this story .Aparna

    PS on one of my comments u had written if i would get mad when the mystery gets revealed, so far i m quite happy with myrah- paro connect, am i missing something??

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    1. Thank you Aparna. You are praising me too much. Now we really hope we can meet your expectations.

      In one of your comments you mentioned that you are waiting to know how Paro became Myrah. I have not covered that part yet. You sounded so optimistic about finding in the next two chapters. And hence I was afraid you will be mad if you don't find the connect.

      And now I am at ease that you are not mad. So all is fine. That is all.

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  22. Ah ok...now even I know what u meant :) Aparna

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  23. hmmm meet the parents
    that didnt go too well
    but not that bad either
    seems father in law aint so happy with rudra
    but she does love him
    boy he thought as dhruv
    well who would call him boy
    hmmm her mother is very chirpy
    but father isnt sure about change of bridegroom
    he doesnt know anything about rudra naa
    like he does for rohit
    but the truth is they dont even know their daughter isnt their daughter
    well lets see how things progress from here

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